Comments : First Date

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Savannah,

    Keep working on those lyrics as this is an excellent start. I like the line 'I'm not too fond of falling over'.

    Well done and all the best,

    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by Savannah

      Thank you so much! I really appreciate that.

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Savannah, wonderful song lyrics. It's really coming together nicely.