Hi this is my poem about a girl who was killed, i saw it happen when i was 5. Her name was Carrie and she was my best friend and she was basicly my sister. I worte this because the anniversary of her death has just past. Yes this was a real event like all my other poems.
Sam

Thanx Kriss

thats wonderful, in a dreadful way, your poem was excellent but the pain you must feel is horrible, it was very strong though really powerful, i'm sorry this happened to you, but great poem