Final Note

by Allie   Nov 10, 2016


She's writing a final note to anyone who ever seemed to care. And this is what she wrote.

" I'm writing this final note to you.  I'm sorry it's come to this. I don't want you to question yourself why. I don't want you to feel like some how this is your fault. I've chosen to write my story a little short. I don't want you to be ashamed of my decision nor do I want you to question it. I'm sorry this won't make sense in the end. Don't act like you care now when it's time for me to end all this fake madness. This just feels right to me. I'm particularly gone now, so why not finish it off? I'm writing this final note because I can't take this anymore. My time has come and these will be my final words written on this piece of paper, I'll sign it with love and so much relief as I let go of everything that has become me".

She's writing her final note and no.. she doesn't think it's a joke. She's taken her last breaths in and she's exhaled all her demons out. Her story has ended and there's no going back. But please remember her as she was tired of the struggle and needed some peace. Please keep this final writing as a keep sake.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Allie, this is a hard hitting piece I must say but done in a way that grips me as a reader. I do like the style of this as the note itself has a quick flow to it which I am guessing was your intention because when you think its all over there's so much you want to say so you write everything down and it doesn't matter if it comes out jumbled or not all that matters is that it comes out, I know I have been there when I hit rock bottom so I am thankful I was spared.

    If you do need to talk, I am here.
    Em

    • 8 years ago

      by Allie

      I really appreciate it! I'm having a really hard time right now and I thought it would be better to write this out than act on it! Thanks for reading

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Oh Allie, this is so sad and tragic. Even though everything in this world seems like it's against us, it's not. I truly believe a ray will shine through in our darkness hour. Take care-

    • 8 years ago

      by Allie

      Thanks for reading!

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