Your Love

by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist   Nov 12, 2016


Your love is worse than any venomous bite
It paralyzed me and blinded my sight.

Your love is worse than any intoxicating drink
Yeah man! everytime you talked I shrunk.

Your love is worse than any lung disease
You checked out other women,oh boy I can't breathe

Your love is like the sharpest ninja sword
You sliced my heart into two halves with your blade like words.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Augustus Black

    This looks like an evil side of love.

    I like the moral and teaching coming forth from this write is that -- one should learn a person from all sides before falling in love with him. You cannot just trust anyone easily in this world. This is my way of thinking actually.

    If love starts taking decreasing path, then --Yes, the life starts getting bad. And your description is very cool and at the same time I felt very bad to read because it is troubling you very badly.

    Hope you will be fine. All the best.

    I was busy with coaching stuff.

    • 8 years ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Augustus thanks for the great comment..Everyone is welcome to give their opinions. .. and I'm cool with that. ..:)

      take care brother

  • 8 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Gel,
    Such a sad write.. love is everything. its fun exciting new, then it can turn ugly, hurtful... You displayed your emotions well!

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Gel, such a sad write. Love or what is done in the name of love, can be extremely destructive and abusive. I think you really hit on this really well. Hugs-

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Gel a rather sad piece. Love can be the most beautiful thing or the most hurtful.

    All the best.

    • 8 years ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      You are certainly right Em. ... I will wait for the beautiful love to come .... but for now I will focus on my dreams. ...Thank you Em

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    No, D - ...

    just kidding

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