Comments : Your Love

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Very good, Gel. It never ceases to amaze me how contrasting love can be. The sweetest nectar or - in this case - a ninja's blade!

    Well done and all the best,

    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    As Ben says, love is contrasting, like black is to white. One moment you feel heaven bound, then in a blink you're drowning in the filthiest sewer.

    Very good.

    • 8 years ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Really Sir Michael?

      Filthiest sewer? ewwww.. you are very good in comparing...hahahha

      no more Euphemism ? hahahah just kidding

      thanks for the words Sir Michael

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    No, D - ...

    just kidding

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Gel a rather sad piece. Love can be the most beautiful thing or the most hurtful.

    All the best.

    • 8 years ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      You are certainly right Em. ... I will wait for the beautiful love to come .... but for now I will focus on my dreams. ...Thank you Em

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Gel, such a sad write. Love or what is done in the name of love, can be extremely destructive and abusive. I think you really hit on this really well. Hugs-

  • 8 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Gel,
    Such a sad write.. love is everything. its fun exciting new, then it can turn ugly, hurtful... You displayed your emotions well!

  • 8 years ago

    by Augustus Black

    This looks like an evil side of love.

    I like the moral and teaching coming forth from this write is that -- one should learn a person from all sides before falling in love with him. You cannot just trust anyone easily in this world. This is my way of thinking actually.

    If love starts taking decreasing path, then --Yes, the life starts getting bad. And your description is very cool and at the same time I felt very bad to read because it is troubling you very badly.

    Hope you will be fine. All the best.

    I was busy with coaching stuff.

    • 8 years ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Augustus thanks for the great comment..Everyone is welcome to give their opinions. .. and I'm cool with that. ..:)

      take care brother