Comments : Prisms (Acrostic + Rime Couee)

  • 8 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Hi,

    thanks for introducing this form. .. I liked it and your poem as well.... well rhymed and nice message. ..

    Gel

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Very clever, Jessica, with a nice little slant rhyme between 'siren' and 'sovereign'. I really do love these mixed forms from you and the imagery you always seem to muster never ceases to surprise me.

    Well done. All the best,

    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by stormingdance (Lessa)

      Thanks Ben! :) I am working on more. I may need suggestions for an Acrostic+Triolet form. Several of the lines repeat so I am trying to think of the perfect 8 letter word!

  • 8 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Jess. What a lovely form of writing.. :) I may have to try this! Well done :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Jessica, another unique write from you-I love the forms you used and the story it tells-well done-

  • 8 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Jessica ,

    this is a powerful write. ..

    Shattering earthquakes with my roar
    Making what is mine, also yours
    Surviving - sovereign

    Very well said

    Gel

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Pure genius

  • 6 years ago

    by Abstract Poet

    Beautiful poem.

  • 4 years ago

    by Ziad Dib Jreige

    Beautiful Jessica.
    rare are these days, the poets who respect the golden rules of poetry. I'm glad that you are one of them. great work, great rhymes, full of imageries and symbolisms . short and sharp .