Just stay away

by El_Mabini   Nov 14, 2016


Why you need me again?
Are you insane?
Are you here to give me pain?
Do you know you are the reason
Why I'm hurting

Before i was badly hoping
And believing you'll return
Now my heart is all locked up
Because I stop waiting
And i don't give a crap.

So can you please stop
I don't want to hear
All the nonsense you'll say
I can't take it anymore
Just stay away.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Jenn

    I really like this poem, but the first line doesn't flow so well.
    "Why you need me again?"
    I think I would have gone more of
    "Why do You need me again?"
    or
    "What? Do You need me again?!"
    Probably the latter.

    I love the final verse, because I believe we all have had that one toxic love in our life.
    The one You have to completely shut down for a while, to keep them from getting back into our hearts.

    Over al I gave You a 5. I felt that You did portray Your emotions here, and it was not badly written. But I would like to see more metaphors, and symbolism in Your poems. It really would give them a catchy edge.

    Jenn.

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