I love you

by aliesha   Nov 14, 2016


Tell me its not over
That it was just a game
I wish you said you loved me
I wish this wasn't pain

Tell me how to sleep at night
Without you by my side
How to just forget it all
Come back and be alive

Tell me how to close my mind
From all the thoughts inside my head
Help me fight away this feeling
And forget all that has been said.

I'll never ask you to do these things
No matter how I feel
Even if it always hurts
And my heart will never heal

These feelings of love will stay locked away
Safe inside my head
Safe with me, without a key
So I can never hurt you again.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Aliesha, this is a very sad tale of love. Love (I feel) is anything you make it but most of all it is honesty and trust.

    1: This is a powerful opening and none of us know exactly how 'love' is going to go so we have to take the leap of faith even if it ends up failing miserably but now else can we learn?

    2: When our relationships end we always wonder how we can live without them, how we can sleep without them etc etc but eventually we can and we do with our inner strength and we move onwards and upwards thats for sure.

    3: We can never forget what's been said because words hurt more than anything else which means our minds are always on the go about what's happened even if it's in the back of our minds.

    4: Once things are said we can never take them back.

    5: When we have been hurt we keep pit feelings locked away until we feel someone is worthy of unlocking them, I do like this part, it's my favourite.

    This is a great piece with unforced rhyme
    All the best, Em