I saw your mother on the Tinder

by Magicfriend   Nov 14, 2016


I saw your mother on the Tinder.
She looked so strong and fine.
She told me the game's not over
And I should try to make you mine.

Hey, mama, Tinder is easy,
Easy way just to forget!
New romance will be a treatment
For a tired foolish heart.

Speedy dates are cheesy business.
They've created by a man.
Modern days dictate trends toward
Putting by long-lasting love.

Passion, love, desire, sleeping...
They are sisters by the time.
Technologically serviced
Random searching makes the night.

New romance will tell a story
May be I've seen so many times!
And I want to get no worries
But the hopes are still alive.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Beautiful Tragedy

    Not a problem..

  • 8 years ago

    by Beautiful Tragedy

    This is a breathtaking piece.
    It's smooth, it's easy to read,
    And it says a lot of things.
    Great first write indeed!
    5/5

    • 8 years ago

      by Magicfriend

      Your feedback is important for me. Thanks a lot for your attention.

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Welcome to the site.

    As Em says, this is a very good first post from you with nice, tight stanzas and some good rhyming throughout.

    Keep writing and all the best,

    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Hi, this is a great first write by you and the rhyming is unforced which makes the piece much smoother to read.

    New romance will tell a story
    May be I've seen so many times!
    And I want to get no worries
    But the hopes are still alive.
    ^^
    My fave part.
    Em

    • 8 years ago

      by Magicfriend

      Em, thanks for your attention to my poem!

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