Karla,

This is a write that is so deep and heartfelt that it brought tears to my eyes.....

Your writing has this unique blend of depth, it makes my jaw drop! Just wonderful

Karla like Andrea said you have a depth with you writing that makes us feel the emotion throughout it and yearns, aches etc.

1: I liked this opening because it hits you square in the face. When relationships end people can turn sour and forget even the good times and there's always those. Check the word difficult there's an extra 'f'

2: This really hit me hard as I seem to be going through this very thing right now and it hurts like hell doesn't it? When we love someone we will do anything for them even go through their pain with then and that includes being in the middle when they need someone to shout at, hug etc etc.

3: An enjoyable stanza. Sometimes all we have is memories and though we want to go back, we can't.

4: This really got me, the repetition is good.
We should never feel guilty for things we did

All the best, Em

Excellent..as always 😊