Loved the imagery on the page and what you evoked in my mind.

Well done,

Michael

Hi, this is really good and despite your footnote saying it needs plenty if work etc well it seems good to me.

1: The opening imagery here is of a beautiful angel falling through the sky with broken wings not because of what's happened in her life but what's happening throughout life, maybe I'm wrong.

BOOOM
2: I like this because you have to say it aloud to have more impact.

3: Love this people thinking its an earthquake but instead its a broken, battered angel.

4: Very very vivid imagery here of how battered and broke you are...

5: Once we feel pain it's like we seem to enjoy it but hate it all the same

Fab write,
Em

Aww Lexi. It's a pleasure, bless ya :)

This is wonderfully written, raw great imagery - don't change a thing.