Comments : Losing grip

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    But I drowned you in the same water you saved me from drowning in....I am absolutely love this line! This whole write is raw with its sadness. Well done-

    • 8 years ago

      by Beautiful Tragedy

      I put everything I had into this piece, so I sincerely appreciate this.
      Thank you so much.

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    So much emotion and great descriptives.
    Em

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    I could really feel the invested emotion in every line.

    It's true though. We search for answers only to find that we held them all along.

    Well done,

    Michael

  • 7 years ago

    by Mary

    Your poetry is amazing. So descriptive and full of emotion and longing. This is very, very good. I enjoy reading your pieces.

    • 7 years ago

      by Beautiful Tragedy

      Thank you so much! I put so much into my work for my writing is the most important thing to me- nothing feels better than to hear how amazing or appreciated my work is to others. I completely appreciate this! You just made my day!