My Mind

by Francisco   Nov 16, 2016


No one knows the real me
that's my serious side

My mind will never compromise
goofy when it's time to hide

Living with my ride or dies
with a connection of loneliness inside

Catch fire like a family
wondering why people care for me

Am I who I want to be
or just a melody?

If I leave this cage
and display what I am

Rage will flow the room
and I am the reason it blooms

What I say now I can't say in person
Afraid to speak my emotions

Hide pain with a smile
still thinking motivation is a thing
but it's not for me

Motivation for others
Happiness for my brothers
Pride for my mother
Corrupted by another

~Francisco

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  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    I liked this a lot, good rhyming throughout. A lot of inner struggle you seem to be fighting with. Also welcome to P&Q, looking forward to seeing more of your writes.

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Hi and welcome to the site.
    I enjoyed this, those last lines are powerful.

    Em

    • 8 years ago

      by Francisco

      Hello, thank you for welcoming me to this amazing site. This was all in my mind, I am really glad you enjoyed it!

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello,

    There is a lot of poetry here. I like the rhymed end lines and inner rhyme too. I like the metaphoric content that hints so well of a secret that is yearning to be free.

    Once you've edited out the unwanted characters it'll look better.

    Well done,

    Michael

    • 8 years ago

      by Francisco

      Thank you! I am barely starting poetry as a way to express my emotions.

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