Hi Luce

Another great write from you..

Suddenly,
my thoughts started to expand...

[ O u t - o f - n o w h e r e !]

It's as if those thoughts
started to be like a universe full of galaxies
that I must began to explore.

My favorite stanza...

Bravo amiga.

Gel

Loved this.

Em

"It's as if those thoughts
started to be like a universe full of galaxies
that I must began to explore."

^^ This confused me a bit, and it made me wonder what tense you were really going for because it changes the entire story element.

But everything else was beautifully penned here and I especially love how smooth this felt even though there was no real structure to it (yes that's a good thing - it's just so hard to do well). I really love how much description and energy you have in this piece. It feels like I just took a journey through the Milky Way and stepped into your heart.

Gorgeous write!

I absolutely love this. This piece puts into words exactly how I feel about poetry. This is a wonderful write.

I really like this, especially the format.

I love this on how you cut the stanzas. .. I mean the layout is clever. ....speechless. ..