Comments : I Love You

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Francisco, this is a lovely piece full of love and emotion.

    1: We are all afraid to say we love somebody especially if we have been hurt before.

    2: This shows that you really do love this person especially if you can say it so freely.

    3: Beautiful part. Actions speak louder than words.

    4: I like this part because although you don't want her to leave you will let her go so that she is happy, if she isn't happy with you which shows it's true, honest love.

    5: This is what loves about.. Support, trust, honesty... I could go on.

    6: Your love will help her overcome any pain especially if it's sincere, honest and true.

    7: Reminding someone that you love them is a day to day thing.

    8: This is a beautiful ending though I think the first love may be better as heart so it reads like this
    "This I truly mean
    With all my heart..." Only because love is repeated in the last line. Only a suggestion though.

    All the best, Em