Pain

by Phil   Nov 19, 2016


Pain can consume us, make us self loath
Always in pain feeling nowhere can be home.
I feel and I think pain is the way, how could I
Not when I feel pain every single day.

PW 19/11/16

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  • 8 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Phil. Well done on a very thought provoking piece.

    • 7 years ago

      by Phil

      Thanks all. Much appreciated
      PW

  • 8 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Phil

    Pain will always be pain
    In your heart so deep
    And sometimes you wish that you're
    Numb enough to keep you alive.

    Like Em just said keep going. .

    Gel

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Phil, well done on this acrostic-Its a sad reminder of what so many people have to go through each and every day. Well done-

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Pain is truly
    Awful to comprehend
    In any circumstance,
    Never give up.

    Great acrostic. Keep going.
    Em

    • 8 years ago

      by Phil

      Thank you

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Phil,

    Yes, I suppose if we live with pain all the time, there must come a point when we have to consider if there is actually any other way to live.
    A sobering thought...

    Well done,

    Ben

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