This would be my longest sleep..Goodbye

Very sad.. but i could relate.. very well done.

I enjoyed very much, but in me at least it strikes chords of sadness

I like it, even though it's in a lot of ways, sad. The way its written is very good, educational in some ways for you used some, well, not so simple medical words and phrases. That adds to the interesting part. Really good.

Crikey, Gel, apart from this being immensely sad, there are also quite a few technical terms in relation to the body (and I didn't have to google one!)

Excellent stuff,

Ben

"the longest sleep" this sounds like a suicide note, or a farewell from someone who has a terminal illness.

I have often wondered what I would prefer: Knowing when I am going to die, or it happen without warning.

In your depiction, every body part gets the chance to imagine saying 'goodbye' in its own unique way. This is a clever way of breaking down the experience, cell by cell, drawing out the 'longest sleep' for as long as it tales for each cell to say 'farewell'.

Well done, Gel.

Take care,

Michael x