Wow! This is so sad, so raw, so right in the movement of how someone can feel after someone else has walked out successfully shredding our heart. I felt your pain and wanted to help pick up your shattered heart. So well done- hugs to you-

I completely and truthfully feel the raw. Painful emotion in this as it seeps through and pulls me in like a fisherman catching fish!!

Take care, Em

This is amazing, so heartfelt, and gutwrenching. It is always incredible to read something that touches you because it describes perfectly how you have felt at some point in your life. This is an excellent write

This is a very emotional piece. It captivates the readers attention. It pulls at the heart strings and makes the reader wonder who the heroine might be talking about. Is it a lost lover, a child, or a friend. It keeps your audiences attention, wondering what could cause such a raw, painful emotion. It brings to life so many emotions tied in one. Love, disappointment, and some might feel a sign of regret by the way the words you chose played out. Excellent job.