Comments : Ash (Acrostic + Senryu)

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Well written, Jessica.
    You seem to pull these little double forms off effortlessly. In fact, you have inspired me to try my hand at an acrostic sonnet which may or may not be posted here depending on the results, lol

    Take care,

    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by stormingdance (Lessa)

      Thanks, Ben! I am working on an acrostic sonnet and would like to read yours! :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    This is fantastic

  • 8 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Nice to see this double form poem... you are Fab Jess

    Gel

  • 8 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Excellent! love the style :)