Lovely poem, Gel, but don't worry too much about letting Him down. Do the right things, treat people well and be happy with yourself and the rest will follow naturally, I'm sure.

All the best,

Ben

Gel, I must say I am an atheist but this was a wonderful dedication of your love for the lord.

All the best, Em

I'm really glad to read this write. I can see you are maturing as a write. Every line is very beautiful. Also I see many kinds of emotions in this write, emotions of hope, love and sadness. Which is making this write more interesting.

I have a great attention at the last line of this poem --

'I saw you already at the end of the tunnel, you are my light.'

That line is truly standing out in a very decent position. I personally adore that line the most because it is stating the huge meaning of life. Life in Christ is always been hard for many people, but still we keep on trying hard to cross the tunnel of darkness, guided by the great God's light and grace. Amazing line really. I like this.

One of the very nice poem. 5/5

A beautiful write and tribute to your faith

Gel,
Im not very religious but it seems you put all your faith in your god. Well done on another piece about it.