WOW!
Okay.. well done.. I was nearly crying by the end of this.. Love Fizzling out like a flame on a candle at wicks end is a terrible feeling...

Nominated. this deserves to be shared with everyone.

Wow ....this is an excellent piece..
I like your choice of words. ..

well done

Gel

You are a talented writer. This is sad but you write beautifully. You somehow turn sad subjects into graceful and lovely pieces. A broken relationship is so very painful but we learn from those and then move on. I enjoyed reading this

Wow! This was intense! I felt your pain in every stanza. I was nodding along as your write unfolded, so have been there. You really did an awesome job pouring this out. Well done-

Omg you just summed up my last relationship I exactly know how u feel But from experience now it does get better it's better to move on. You know at the time it was probably fire but it's strange how quickly it can go to flame no thought of our own we ain't to blame. But just learn from it and grow and one day you will see it just made you a stronger woman today. Brill poem I gave you a 5 x lilly

Fault**

Beautiful poem . I loved it . You really write beautifully :)

You have a way with words. Beautifully written. The emotion goes to great depths. 5/5

Again just beautifully written

“Like the moon and stars have both collided; ” great imagery here

I find your poems easy to read and have such depth that captures entire moments in time wonderfully.