Comments : Please dont let me be..

  • 8 years ago

    by Jack Nightengale

    Such pain within these words. To know of pain by pushing others away when all you really want is to be pulled in and told that everything will be alright. Great work in displaying such powerful emotions

  • 8 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Jenn,
    I feel your pain. Such a sad write.

    • 8 years ago

      by Jenn

      Thank You Jack & deeplydisturbed.

  • 8 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Life itself, is a gift of hope. There's always a place called forward. Things go wrong to turn good at last.

  • 8 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Powerful Piece Jenn. ..I like it on how you injected an emotions on every line. ..

    well done

    Gel

  • 8 years ago

    by Jenn

    Thank you Marvellous & Gel

  • 8 years ago

    by Beautiful Tragedy

    This poem drips with raw emotion; And I too, have been there. You did and amazing job capturing the full extent of your feelings. Great job.
    Xoxo

    • 8 years ago

      by Jenn

      Thank You LW

    • 8 years ago

      by Jenn

      Thank You LW

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Jenn, such a raw write. You really put your all out there. I felt your pain in every line. Well done-hugs to you-

  • 8 years ago

    by Beautiful Tragedy

    You're welcome :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Wow! I'm speechless and in tears.

  • 8 years ago

    by Jenn

    Thank You Brenda & Em..