Bunch

by Jyoti Rawat   Nov 30, 2016


We have lots of reason for survive
we have lots of reason for death

Between life or death
we struggle lot for good life.

"Life is bunch of trouble we should open it and very peacefully & patiently keep trying to sort it out, till the end...."

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  • 7 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    True to the core we do have lots of reason and we have the choice to make it right and live the way. Well done! Just one suggestion:

    We have lots of reason for survive

    ^^Maybe adding to will make the read better: we have lots of reason to survive.

    Well thought and well penned! Take care~

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Jyoti,

    A thoughtful piece of writing. Well done. I like the quote at the end there, too.

    Take care,

    Ben

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