Your words can create another planet,another moon
another sun, a universe or monsoon

^^

Lovely couple of lines, Gel and a lovely write overall.

Well done,

Ben

Gel, such a lovely write. Your visuals were just dreamy. Well done-

Hi Gel, I did enjoy this write and love the lines Ben stated they stuck out..
I must admit the ending threw me off abit though all in all good write.

Em

The line "and if this is just a dream, don't wake me up please"

Reminded me of a poem I wrote a long time ago. Ah! Thank you.

As far as the ending, it made me chuckle. I think it shows part of your personality. It adds a bit of humor.

I for one don't enjoy being woken up when I'm in a middle of a dream. I haven't gotten to the point of hitting anyone, but my eyes may prompt that I want to do that lol

Wow! this made me laugh, especially the ending :)
Well done!