Dream

"Is it all a dream i hear but i don't see you i see you but i don't fell when i wake up from my dream this will be true I will be loved and fell loved and I will love you when will this dream be over its like it will never end and you will never love me and i will never see you plz help me wake me up and take my breath away and pain away because i don't want to lay here dream all my life I want life with you cant you see i don't want to dream no more so wake me up plz.

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