Uhmm.. pain what do you do to me?

Hello Luce,

Often I read your work and wonder if the page in front of me is your white matter dissected, gooey parts spelling out your random reasoned thoughts. In other words, insanity verging on genius. Painful? Yes, that'll be your 'heartache, or the frontal labotomy. ;)

X

Luce, this is a very thought provoking piece that I guess could have many interpretations depending on how it's perceived.

Oh pain that in me reside,
Won't you leave my loving heart
and flee to other organ now?
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This opening is somewhat saddening as I can feel the pain you feel, the pain you want to rid of which will not go do you get used to it but still pain comes and engraves itself on you/us so we get used to it a little but it still hurts when we get mistreated. I think organ needs an 's' on the end though, not sure.

Oh, wait?!
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Like how you separated this as if to make us all pause and say these words especially out loud, It's perfect.

Is it so that in my heart you feel loved?
And that with me,
You feel accepted as you are?
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This makes me think you're asking someone you love but in fact you aren't you're asking the pain you feel if it feels accepted and going back to my earlier statement I reckon the answer will be yea. I feel like this so much and it aches our hearts.
...

Then I guess,

Stay with me...

But don't break my loving heart.
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Love this ending because you are kind of accepting the pain you have been dealt but you shouldn't, none of us should.
Maybe I got this all wrong but my interpretation.

All the best, Em

Ahhh the play of love and the ways it affects one's heart. Like I've said before you have a knack to pull a reader along with you on your journey of writes!

Luce

A heartfelt write Luce. .I love it. .. :)

gel