I really enjoyed this Hellon

Nicely executed. The story is outlined: two ladies brief liason on adjacent travellators. This scene is more about the shared unspoken dialogue. It begs the reader to wonder what the back story is.

Just a suggestion, if the poem faded instead of an end question it would stand alone, whilst still setting up the prequel.

Like this:

What was her name I wondered,

as she faded from view...

Just an idea. ;)

Take care,

Michael x