Aww Gem you made it short. ... I read this on wattpad and it's really amazing. ...I like the graphic visuals you wanted to portray. ..The gunshots and the blood. .. I liked it. .coz I know you're good in firing. ..so I can visualise everything you said here...

Nice long poem / story
well done

Gel

An accomplished piece of writing, full of great visuals and detail.
This is well penned - something a little different on P&Q and pleasing to read in terms of the layout.

Well done and all the best,

Ben