by Mr. Darcy Dec 3, 2016
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Twisted words writhe |
The worst abuse is sometimes the stuff that can't be seen. Striking a child's esteem every time he attempts to become something lasts a lifetime. |
by Mr. Darcy
Very true, Larry. The worst scars are the invisible permanent ones. |
by Em
Hello Michael, It's me again. I saw your comment on Jessica's poem and had to come back as I knew you had changed the title and most definitely tweaked this little gem ALOT making it even more perfect than when I first read it. |
Suspenseful and amazing imagery. |
by Naughtymouse
Michael, your writing always carries with it the most amazing imagery. Epicness. |
by Meena Krish
I've never seen anyone write about a snake so descriptively making it sound like an assassin! The layout of the poem too with spaces in between builds up the momentum keeping the read on edge. |