Comments : In the distant sky

  • 8 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Distance makes the heart grow fonder they say but it also packs with it lots of pain. Just to have that one person with you near always seems to be a far away dream...touching write.

    Just one thing:

    For once observed
    I see your eyes speak
    For once observed
    The stars in their twinkling

    ^^I think you meant the stars in there twinkling rather then their..?

    • 8 years ago

      by Ray Blue

      Made the edits Meena, thank you again! keep on Writting as well!