Comments : Where have all the Flowers Gone

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Maple,

    I love the personification of the flowers here and the extended metaphor of the tough weed/person.
    This is beautifully written and I think just about deserves a nomination!

    Take care and all the best,

    Ben

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    This sent shivers down my spine Andrea.
    Beautiful.

    Em

  • 7 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Freakin hell syrup!! I love you nature pieces so much, and i always love your metaphors, in this piece you have used them to maximum effect and effortlessly your writing never seems forced or rushed and almost always is relatable as s**t! Awesome write!!!

  • 7 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Andrea, this is intense drawing upon raw emotion and channeling it right here.

    Well done, another gem. X

  • 7 years ago

    by stormingdance (Lessa)

    Touching and thought provoking. Thanks for sharing.

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    Andrea, this is just lovely! There's a lot of "weeds" that truly are beautiful and far more resilient than those hot house beauties. Loved this!

  • 7 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Okay Andrea, i think everyone has said everything i wanted to say!
    Well done is all thats left! this is amazing.