Hi Ademole,

This is a dark but very well written piece

The wind blew with the scorching heat of the sun and the brave in heart became weary at the sound of crying babies, so the soul of mortals faint from trembling
Hope turns into fear as iceberg merges with the sea
With mystery comes the one to fulfill the prophecy
The people received the rebirth of the new dawn, joy seen at edge of doom

Hmmmn this bring me some chill. .Love the words you use

Great piece
Gel