Comments : Waves of Words

  • 8 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    How so true...words said in anger without a thought and in haste does leave a scar for the one receiving it and as days pass by those very words become a regret to the one who shot it out!

    Yet words that help and lift a spirit will always be a light in a person's life for it carries them through even in the harshest winter.

    Then again this is life, we learn from our mistake and carry with us a bag of lessons...

    Its so good to see you writing again and it gives me plenty to think, feel and even write...thank you :)

    • 8 years ago

      by William Mae

      Thank you Meena, thank you for all the encouragement you've given me, for all the kind words. Yes kind words make a difference.

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    This is (as always) well written and rhymes with great imagery.

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    William,

    This is an excellent and thoughtful little write, with no little amount of perception.
    I suppose these ripples that cause tidal waves could also be thought of as the butterfly effect, whereby a small breeze created from a butterfly's wings can go on and escalate causing mass disturbances elsewhere.
    Whatever we say and whatever we do has consequences; just because we regard them as small, perhaps, doesn't mean they don't have altogether bigger consequences elsewhere.

    This is very good.

    All the very best,

    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Mary

    William, your poems always are so meaningful and have such a good message to them. This is so very true, people will so thoughtlessly throw out words or seemingly harmless actions and not give a thought to them but it could be something that effects someone for a lifetime. This really gives the reader something to think about.

    • 8 years ago

      by William Mae

      Thank you Mary, often times the best words are words unspoken,