Comments : Brewed Awakening

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Aegis, I have never read anything like this before. I think it is a genius. Your use of words, just fantastic.
    I feel the end line is sarcastic, is it meant to be? Maybe I just read it wrong. Lol

    Great write. Em

    • 7 years ago

      by Aegis

      Thank you Em:) Actually the last line is quite sincere. I woke up this morning feeling almost... Alive.
      It was the first time in weeks that i didnt dread the daylight leaking through the blinds.
      I appreciate all your kind words on my pieces. It really means a lot that somewhere, there are people that appreciate my pretty words. Usually my words only cause disaster. So thank you:)

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Aegis,

    A clever poem and I particularly love the title in relation to the content.

    Well done,

    Ben

    • 7 years ago

      by Aegis

      Im really happy you enjoyed that connection. It has almost more meaning than the poem itself:)