Heating up

by deeplydesturbed   Dec 13, 2016


Unable to sleep
On a heated summers night
Turn on the aircon

Sleeping nakedly
Hoping noone will walk in
Covered in a sheet

Quarter past twelve now
Tossing and turning in bed
Sleep please take over.

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  • 7 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Insomnia is an itch! *can't say b*itch* :)

    I hope you found sleep eventually.

    X

    • 7 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      Haha yep! It was also due to heat!! Good old summer is here!

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    We might take you up on that haha

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    22 wow.. I should come and visit it's freezing here. I reckon Ben will come too, get out this cold,haha

    • 7 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      Em, you are both more than welcome in my bed anytime!

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    N, loved this, although I think Ben is not going to forgive you lol. I'm with Em, one foot out.

    • 7 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      Haha Brenda! Thanks :) glad you enjoyed! I actually think I have some making up to do to Ben! Haha oops.

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Again, Naomi, you continue to tease and mock those less fortunate than you, not only by boasting of your beautiful Australian
    weather while we sit here in woolly jumpers, but also by conjuring images of women sleeping naked.

    You are fast becoming my least favourite person - and not just in Australia! :)

    Take care and all the best.

    • 7 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      Im sorry my love! How will I continue to live knowing I am hated in this world?!
      Also thank you for your coursing! It made it rain today haha

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