by Mr. Darcy Dec 13, 2016
category :
Special events /
christmas
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by Meena Krish
I've never tried writing a Sestina before for it looked complicated to me; but after reading this it makes me want to try. This poem has a nice flow and rhythm to it with all the spirit of Christmas mixed into each line. Nicely written and congrats on the HM. |
by Naughtymouse
Michael, |
Mr Darcy! Michael.. What a lovely new style! I must get to trying this one! :) |
by Mr. Darcy
Thanks for your vote of confidence. Lol. The form is a very old one, but my first attempt. I messes up, but thankfully Lucero helped. It's more a story than a poem, ideally it would have been a clever poem with all the fixings, but the form is tricky to say the least. Still, the next one might be a little easier. Practice makes perfect, or so they say! Lol |
by Brenda
Michael, what a delightful write! Entertaining throughout. Totally neat style. I have never heard of this before, very cool. That's one of the things (one of many) that I like about you, introducing different styles. Always something new-well done- |
by Everlasting
Ah, there's an error. |
by Mr. Darcy
Thanks, Lucero. Changes made. |