Comments : Cruising in Deep Waters

  • 8 years ago

    by Beautiful Tragedy

    This is absolutely beautiful! I love the feeling of hope it gives off! Well done!

    • 8 years ago

      by Firenrain

      Thank you so much for the encouraging words . It's my first poem and it's lovely to get such a positive response . Thank you

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Absolutely stunning. Well done and welcome to P&Q

    • 8 years ago

      by Firenrain

      Thank you so much my first poem I was nervous . Thank you for the encouraging words and the welcome.

  • 8 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Welcome to pnq! This is a great first poem I'm a fan of mostly dark, nature or love poetry and this is a great example, nice flow and imagery and very emotional without feeling forced.

    Good job!

    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by Firenrain

      Thank you so much Ben. I am happy you liked the poem and I hope to get better. Thank you for the welcome. Hope to share and learn . Cheers !