Comments : Winter doldrums

  • 8 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Brenda,
    Sorry its winter! and the sleep isnt coming to you easily.
    I know what its like wishing it would, closing my eyes for 2 seconds and the alarm is blaring! Its frustrating!

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Wouldn't it be great if we could hibernate lol brrrr it's cold out there.

    Fsb wrote Brenda, hugs

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Thanks ladies! I appreciate you two! This will pass...

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Brenda,

    I have read four or five poems in the last 20 mins or so, and this resonates with me (personally) like no other.
    Oh, to hibernate and wake up in warmer times!

    Nominated

    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by Brenda

      Awww, thank you so much Ben! Wouldn't it be great to be able to do that,?

  • 8 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Oh Brenda--

    We are twins...

    I too feel hibernation...

    The wording and flow of this piece is lovely!!!

    • 8 years ago

      by Brenda

      True that Andrea lol! I think I'm really a bear, I could so hibernate until spring. Thank you do much for your kind words-hugs-

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Oh to bury deep beneath my winter duvet, not to surface until Spring birds call me, tempt me to take. Peek at them on my window sill.

    • 8 years ago

      by Brenda

      Michael, I like where you are going with this-perhaps a write in your future??? I'm beginning to think we all would like to hibernate. Take care and stay warm!

  • 8 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Breda this is a wonderful write...I can definitely relate to this one! I agree with Syrup on this to, your wording and format is spot on!!!

    Great write

    • 8 years ago

      by Brenda

      Ben, thank you so much! I really appreciate your kind comments.

  • 8 years ago

    by stormingdance (Lessa)

    Breathless.

    • 8 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you so much!

  • 8 years ago

    by Belle

    "Winter isn't even officially here yet."

    I love this line. Feels like my life. Very relatable, thank you.

    • 8 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you so much! I feel it's going to be a long winter, sigh..my life is a series of this sometimes, so I definitely feel ya. Hang in there! Hugs-

  • 8 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Hi Brenda,

    I like this one especially the cocoon thing. .. it's like you just like to wrapped yourself like a chrysalis and soon to be a butterfly after all the hard days. ..

    Thanks for sharing... sometimes I feel like this too. .. just want to stay all day inside my room....actually in my sister's room when I'm sad. ..

    well done

    Gel

    • 8 years ago

      by Brenda

      THank you Gel. Please don't be sad, sending hugs your way...