Comments : Christmas (acrostic)

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Absolutely loved this for the challenge and it's very true nowadays that's the main idea of Christmas now I mean don't get me wrong I am atheist so not really into the whole Jesus is born thing but I think Christmas is more about giving than it is receiving.

    Fabulous, Em

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Naomi

    Christmas is...all of the above.
    A lovely acrostic with a comic (and very true) closing line!

    Take care

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    N, wonderful acrostic! So true Christmas day. My folks would head back to bed after all the hoopla and we were busy playing with toys. It was great.

  • 7 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Great acrostic here, it flows really nicely which isn't as easy as it sounds, really atmospheric and christmassy :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello dear,

    I've always said acrostic poetry is one of my favourites. Here you have painted a happy, yet busy Christmas. From the perspective of the parents, their Christmas starts when the children are sleeping. Maybe a Christmas kiss or two?

    Naomi, I wonder if you would mind writing another Christmas acrostic? This time a dark one. Maybe from the perspective of a tramp, or a prisoner, or a parent in a third world country? Morbid, I know, but it could be powerful and send a message out.

    Take care,

    Michael x

    • 7 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      Michael,
      Thank you for the lovely comment. :)

      Such a challenge I shall take you up on! i do however have to wonder why you wont be doing one? :)