by Firenrain Dec 15, 2016
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
I don't know the word love, I have been scarred for life. Like someone tears a paper heart and throws it away in the night. As the little pieces of paper fly away in the dark I think I will forget. But I can't . I don't want to run with the wind and glue back my heart . I am broken cold hurting left to bleed in the dark , As the sun rises, and the darkness bids adieu , I run to pick up the pieces I once threw . I collect them all and glue back my heart and now it beats of bravery and healed scars. |
by Em
Hi, I really like your style of writing and it's not like what I usually read (which isn't a bad thing actually far from it) it's unique and that's what can make good poetry alongside imagery. I like being able to imagine I am the writer and feel what they feel and this is one of those pieces that take me along with you... I feel your emotion and pain throughout this. |
by Firenrain
Hello it's encouraging to know that you find my style of writing poetry unique . I am happy to know that my poetry can make others feel the emotions I feel . Thankyou for being kind enough to notice my poetry. Many thanks |