Hi, I really like your style of writing and it's not like what I usually read (which isn't a bad thing actually far from it) it's unique and that's what can make good poetry alongside imagery. I like being able to imagine I am the writer and feel what they feel and this is one of those pieces that take me along with you... I feel your emotion and pain throughout this.
This is me right now, trying to glue my broken heart together and move on but it can be so difficult when all you've known is hurt but love is what we make it so we have to make it great.

Fab write, Em