Rain

by Dottie Donathan   Dec 16, 2016


G. Tears kept falling down that pretty pretty face. Tears kept falling down to the ground like rain. Once in a while you could see a slight smile but never again when it rains

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  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    I can feel the emotion within this piece and it's very sad. Those painted on smiles and tears are all too familiar with me but I believe we have to be happy with ourselves to be happy at all.

    Take care,
    Em

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Dottie and welcome to p n q

    An intriguing post from you here with a terribly sad tone to it. I couldn't help but wonder who this person was when I reached the end but it's that ambiguity that I liked about it.

    Keep writing and all the very best,

    Ben

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