"Reverse Haiku"

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Jessica - You're just making these forms up now, lol Aren't you content with taking the forms there are, mashing them up and making them look ridiculously easy? It seems not, and now - here we have you - creating your own unique one!
I like the subtle use of rhyme employed here and - as usual - your wonderful imagery.

Take care

Jessica, I am blown away from your technique! Reverse haiku? Brilliant and beautifully written!

I like this Jessica, it's very creative to arrange such an ancient form this way. Like a traditional Haiku, this form is about nature, a season. Maybe with the rain clouds help the reader think of the month April and it's associated showers? I think however, that there could be a human link, something about rain and tears equating to a heart opening fully. This form also has a turn, or a pivot (volta) in line 3. Here we see after the rain/tears and revealed truths, there really is only 'surrender ' : surrendering to another completely, perhaps?

Jessica, if this poem does have a human element, perhaps post as a Senyru, or if it's a bit of both a, Sintuit.

Either way, a good poem. X

Fantastic.