Comments : Echoings

  • 8 years ago

    by hiraeth

    I can see why you posted it in the love section, but it still oozes out a dark/sad vibe - especially with the usage of 'minor chords' in addition to being set during night and the importance of the moon (the narrator being aware of the moon & 'drowning in its waves' indicates insomnia). That said, there's a sliver of hope that cracks through this poem, and it's rather warming. A wonderful write, hope to see more from you!

  • 8 years ago

    by Belle

    Wonderfully written, I can feel the hope. That a lover once lost might still think of you too.