Tara,

What a sad and emotionally moving piece of poetry this is. It is written well and has some marvellously fluent rhyming throughout.
I particularly liked the way you changed the layout at the end; short, sharp lines which drive the emotion in your words home.

All the very best,

Ben

As Ben said this is a very emotional piece, there are no words for this...

Em

Am I completely off track, or is this a poem more about healing and hope, than it is about sadness? I have missed your words so very much! Who knows, maybe its time for me to try and write something.

Love,
Randy Lee

Tara, such a sad write-the longing comes through in waves. Losing a child is the absolute worse-well done and I'm sorry.