Comments : So this is Christmas? Collaboration by Em & Bren

  • 7 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello Brenda, is this a Christmas gift from Em and Bren (sp?)

    I like the title, just like the charity song.

    If so, what a lovely idea to gift a poem, and a collaboration at that!

    This Christmas poem seems to be about a war zone, Aleppo, perhaps. It makes for a difficult read, but the truth is there are many people/ children living in conditions like this and Christmas day is just like any other to them - Hell on Earth!

    Thank you for posting this and highlighting this painful truth!

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello ladies.

    Yes, it is rather confusing, isn't it? What on Earth can Christmas day really mean to the hundreds of thousands in these conditions? It's almost absurd - an extravagant luxury for those who are better off. What do we actually have to celebrate at the moment?
    I know that that is a negative way of looking at things, but when innocent people live with such atrocities day in and day out, it's hard to be positive.

    Well highlighted and all the best,

    Ben

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    Thanks guys! Em had an amazing idea for this write and it just flowed from there. I appreciate as I'm sure Em does your wonderful comments.

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    I sure do Brenda, thanks everyone :)

  • 7 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Girls excellent work. Really made me think about things.

    • 7 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thanks N, that means a lot. Hugs to you!

  • 7 years ago

    by stormingdance (Lessa)

    Indeed. Geeat and thoughtful write.

    • 7 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you- Em came up with this story and it just took off.