Energy Vampire

I feel you are having trouble taking hold of this great sweet love. I truly adore this write because it holds some great characteristics of the subject of love. I feel great flow of sentiments and red cheeks in the nerves of this breathtaking write. Most interesting part is that you have pasted your all emotions of love from the core of the brain very cleanly.

The beginning of the first and true love starts exactly the way you have described. We humans struggle, fall and again we get up for chasing the crush. My suggestion -- Go for him, defer some respect. Hope he will coddle you in a nice manner.

Third and last segment is my favourite. It looks like hitting a home-run when a girl say I will never chase any guy.

Nice deft write. You are a talented bard.

You always come up with some great ideas for a poem. I always like to read something that's fresh, yes it's a love poem, and love poems have been here for ages but still, the way you expressed things here is really very fresh.
You are a very talented writer, I've said that countless times before, I think, but yeah, you are one helluva writer. Keep it coming.

Gel, wonderful write-loved the concept-very cool.

"An energy vampire"

A weird and wonderful concept here, Gel!
I love the idea of a person literally being able to 'suck' the sense and energy out of someone, leaving them 'helpless and heedless'.

Well done on this and all the best,

Ben

Love this!

Nominated.

EDIT: Apparently i am being greedy and have used my nominations, i will be back next week to nominate.