Comments : Disaster (Acrostic)

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    Jessica, totally rocking the acrostics-lots of food for thought here-well done-

  • 7 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Jessica,

    I'm reading a theme here. It sounds like you've been caused a lot of pain by someone close. I'm glad you're using this anger in a creative way. I wrote a similar one recently called, 'slaughtered in the shadows'

    Take care.

    • 7 years ago

      by stormingdance (Lessa)

      Yes and I am finally seeing that the problem is not me. For so long I've felt ashamed to be me and so defeated. My feelings and dreams never mattered. My succes was shamed and failures mocked by the one person in the world who I needed to believe in me. What is one to do? As an adult, I am still treated this way. But I have the power to walk away and discover belief in my own self.

      Anyhow, thanks for commenting and Happy Holidays!

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Another fantastic acrostic.
    Em

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Jessica,

    Another really good formed piece of poetry from you with a very dark edge to it.

    Well done and all the best,

    Ben