William,

A lovely, seasonal write from you with some seamless rhyming and a nice little story woven in.

Well done, take care and all the best,

Ben

A heart warming write for this Christmas season and to make all remember that God is still around...

Liked the flow and the perfect rhymes which falls in subtly making it a lovely read. Just one thing:

Beyond they're lighted door.

^^Should it not be "beyond their lighted door"

All in all liked it and am happy to see you writing again :)

Perfection on screen.
Em