Opposites Attract

by Maher   Dec 28, 2016


It's cold, I
could never imagine your warmth; I
already feel out of control. I
nearly fell into your norm; I
try as I might on my own. I
don only what I'll ever need; I
open my roads all alone. I
trust only the ones who I heed; I
hold every control over fear. I
instil only good in my will; I've
silently conquered the years.

    report violation
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  • 7 years ago

    by Ren

    Fantastic write!

    • 7 years ago

      by Maher

      Thank you :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    I commented on this already but I really like it so I came back for this

    • 7 years ago

      by Maher

      Haha thanks again Gel :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Maher,

    Nice poem from you. ..and I like the layout ...you put all Your "I's" on the right. ..

    I
    instil only good in my will; I've
    silently conquered the years.
    ^^
    my favourite lines

    Gel

    • 7 years ago

      by Maher

      Thanks Gel, I'm glad part of it resonated with you :)

      There's a meaning behind why I laid it out that way lol

  • 7 years ago

    by Beautiful Tragedy

    Very powerful write maher.
    Great job!

    • 7 years ago

      by Maher

      Thanks, glad you enjoyed it :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello,

    This poem has a fresh feel to it, the purposely placed 'i' gift a look that I found appealing. This poetic tool is not unique, but here it looks contemporary. The rhyme is subtle, and perhaps, I would have liked the piece to be more 'in your face gushy' I do appreciate that is my style and that actually the poem speaks volumes in style and form.

    Well done,

    Michael

    • 7 years ago

      by Maher

      Thank you, good Sir. Glad you enjoyed it :)

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